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Reviews For: Take Not For Granted Your Ability To Yawn

grim-dreamer
2005-03-11
ch 1,
A knowledgeable account indeed! I don't know what a 'maxilla' is, but I do know the difficulties of not yawning (Japan considered this rude, but they let me sleep at my desk). The pace is steady and the poem is humorously allegorical. Good references and vocabulary too. Nice one.
Joemerika Productions
2005-03-11
ch 1,
this is really well written i also liked the ryhming style, yawn, well i got 2 go check my reviews by

-Tha G.0.D.
Anathelia
2005-03-11
ch 1,
I like this, I had that happen to me once and no one really understands how annoying it is...AnatheliaPS: Please R&R mine, it would mean alot to me!
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