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| Koba van der Lubbe 2005-04-10 ch 2,  | abuseVery good. 'nuf said. |
| Crazy Biene 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI AM SO SORRY I TOOK SO LONG! U TOO SO LONG! AW this is so awesome! omg...ur so good with emotions...Ashley..*sniffles* |
| AlterGenesis-X 2005-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThat's pretty good. I felt like I've read a similar story before. Most of the suspense comes from what Ashley(Divinia) is actually up to. The main male seems like your "standard" hero. Keep going. |