well the outside matters a little bit...but yeah fashion sucks. not bad, keep writing!

Nice, but some parts don't seem to make alot of sense. Like, should "I can pass you off as goth" Should it be, "I can pass off as goth"? Not sure if I read that correctly, but Good job!

great peice, so very true, always carry that feelings with you, more people should feel that way, wonderful work, thank you for sharing