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| aurora-ice 2006-02-14 ch 1,   | i really like this piece. it tugs at the heart, and it gives me a peaceful feeling. i really like the lines "You left,/but still you linger in me." they kind of inspire me |
| ohldebuttgoodie 2005-08-28 ch 1, | I saw your review on my story Gone but not forgotten thanks for the raving review. I read this one about your grandma. Its great. I don't do poetry but I share alot with my writings. I write the editorials for the church newsletter evey month. Your the first christian I have come across, that has admited to being one. I am sure there are others. I am new to the sight and find it hard to know how to do everything. If you read The Day our miricale happened, don't freak... There is more but I am having trouble figuring out how to add more. zi will eventually have to delete one of them, I just don't know how yet. Thanks.. God bless ya...Mark |
| Aslan Israel 2005-08-12 ch 1, | Not many people see the bright side to death, so I'm glad you included it. I can't say I've ever lost anyone close to me, but I was still touched by this. |
| The Proxy Ninja 2005-07-24 ch 1, | I never had a grandma/granparents, so this was awesome. I really love seeing spirituality in poems. It reinstates my faith in Humanity. Plus, this is simple and sweet-- a godly read, Brighteyes. And blowing kisses, that's really endearing. |
| Andrea Christine 2005-06-19 ch 1, | This is simply beautiful. Wonderfully written. |
| wilderness 2005-06-12 ch 1, | Wow. I'm so sorry about your grandmother. Mine also passed away very recently and this poem was especially moving because of that. Great choice of words, very moving and touching. It clearly comes from somewhere very deep inside you. lani |
| SnoWhiteQueen 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Beautiful. |
| Calliope Rae Marksbury 2005-04-28 ch 1, | Fabulous, I love the way you showed your own innocence reflected in her, talking about blowing kisses. Great work. |
| Lost-And-Confused-In-His-Ey... 2005-04-25 ch 1, | Beautiful. That is realy sweet, I'm sure you're grandmother is up there keeping her promise. Wel done. |
| Fluerdemort 2005-04-25 ch 1, | Very beautiful. It left me with tears in my eyes, as I can relate to this and I'm sure others can too... |
| Needa S 2005-04-24 ch 1, | Touching and very beautful, awesome tribute to your grandma. Sorry for your loss. Btw...Thanks for your review. God Bless. Needa S. |
| UniB0b 2005-04-24 ch 1, | awe, that's really cute. |
| cascadestars 2005-04-24 ch 1, | Beautiful poem. Thanks for my reviews. I added you to my favorite authors. Nice work. ^_^ |
| randomunknown 2005-04-24 ch 1, | This is great, it has a lot of passion in it. Ive been reading some of your other work and I think its all great, keep writing! thank you for the reviews, you made me look at my work in a different way! |
| Infection 2005-04-22 ch 1, | Loved htis poem, it was amazing. |