i love how expressive and brilliantly worded your poems are. really puts a lot more depth to your writing. and i love the last stanza. brings the whole poem to a nice close.

Such a powerful poem that tugs at the heartstring like a rope pulling a bell to ring in some European cathedral. Keep up the excellent writings!

this is really beautifully written. I love the wording, you portray such sadness and hopelessness as well as confusion. wonderful, I really like the last stanza, it just pulls it all together. Great job!

~Hip

Aww...very emotional...touching...*sigh* Amazing. You're an awsome writer. --Pammy--