i promised a review so here it is.
it's interesting, dark, maybe a little disturbing but really good.
English is great as always, its an awesome story overall.
So, keep on truckin, waiting for more stories :)

Whoa... that was really powerful. I mean... damn. That's a great story. I can't think of anything else to say at the moment(later I'll probably think of loads of things) but I liked it. Really liked it.

That was definately different, not like any other schizophrenia story I've ever read. I wonder if Larissa became psychotic as a reaction to her best friend's death or if the Bob character was real. Is it open to interpretation? Either way it goes it was a lovely read, worthy of reading again. I think you did a great job at portraying the illness and when Larissa said she was "complete" it showed me just how lost in the delusion she became. It definately sounded like something that would come out of the mouth of a true schizophrenic.

dude
creepy

oh woahh. shouldn't you make this a horror? that was awesome. :)

aye...jesus christ, he got amelia to kill herself, and then larissa, correct? I'm freaked out. Now I'm gonna get nightmares. :O

W-Wow. . .

I honestly don't know what to say. Except that I am truly freaked out. I'm scared of "Bob." Both the characteristic and the fictional character you've envisioned in this story.

Damn.

Oh wow...that was creepy. Bob is evil! But i really liked it...you did a great job. :)

this is so creepy yet so awesome!

Good thing that i don't have a friend like Bob. XD

I don't think I've been this creeped out by a story before...But I just read this and The Crpytic Doll...So I can't sleep now...THANKS A LOT. Haha, JK.

The moral of the story: do not talk to wierd people like Bob. I think I get the story, but I don't quite gt who Bob is. Is he a ghost thing? Imaginary person? (I think you mentioned that but it doesn't seem like it) And why did he (it was his fault, really) kill Amelia and Larissa? Just a bit freaky, you know. But otherwise it's a good story. :D

This was good I knew what was eventually gonna happen when Bob first came to her, but for some reason I was still like 0.0 The stuff you come up with is amazing. Keep up the good work ;D
~Tyer

Wow... i thought maybe this would be happier, since it wasn't titled horror, but i was sorely mistaken.

It was a great story, but now I'm freaked.

this was really good!! but scarry creepyish at the same time.

ok so amelia committed suicide
and bob's making her do it oo?