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| EmotionsHaveNoBrains 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was good I knew what was eventually gonna happen when Bob first came to her, but for some reason I was still like 0.0 The stuff you come up with is amazing. Keep up the good work ;D ~Tyer |
| Elle Winters 9 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseWow... i thought maybe this would be happier, since it wasn't titled horror, but i was sorely mistaken. It was a great story, but now I'm freaked. |
| x3life 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abusethis was really good!! but scarry creepyish at the same time. |
| emrevolemina 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseok so amelia committed suicide and bob's making her do it oo? |
| thepiemaster 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseTsk tsk, bad Bob, killing little schizophrenic girls. Loved it! |
| Chiclets 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseHave I reviewed this before? I read it before, I know. Hm. Seriously, that story packs a punch and I think the first time I read it I mentally gaped at the screen for a couple of moments when I finished it. It's just...creepy. *shudders* Ha ha... But you are a very good writer. :) Keep at it! |
| Dalamar's Girl 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWoa. I loved this. Its written really well, and although you know what will happen next the story keeps you wondering. |
| Lady E 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseHow creepy. And superb. A masterful snippet of writing that keeps you wondering till the chilling last paragraphs. I thought it interesting that Larissa is so well-off (four story house?) and claims she has no friends aside from Amelia; scary to think we grow close to her, depend uneasily on her thoughts and perspective, and then realize with a jolt that not one of us are any different. And Bob as the conscience? Cruel, sneaky author, you. I'm really hoping you have more one-shots to share! |
| Nihari 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusewow, now that is some mess right there. it was very interesting. i love your writing |
| foreverxtwilight 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThats sick but in a good way. lmao. You.Are.Amazing. |
| hilaryjojo 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI get it! Weird, I never get anything...ehm...yeah...So anyway, good story. Very original. I love originality! |
| lilxseeker 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abusewowerzers...this is kinda freaky but it was written really good...bravo! |
| lilylupin7 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I think I like it...it's just I normally don't go for depressing type stories |
| Br0k3n Mug 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abusei luv all of ur storys!! |
| okimnotcalm 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI don't know what is was, but something about this story just made me burst out laughing. I think it was how deceiving even words can be. Bob is pure evil and he can make people do what ever he wants by lieing. That's really, really cool and I wish I had that ability. Or, wait... Is he lieing...? Maybe he really does love them... But, then why would he make them kill themselves? I really don't know, but, anyway, something about this made me laugh. |