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| aripie 2008-07-10 ch 17,   | this story was really good - im surprised so little reviews came outta it - oh well heres 1 more!! thanks so much for writing it ~ari :) |
| Sobran 2008-05-21 ch 17, | Thank you for the story, I really enjoyed it. Despite several spelling/grammar mistakes ( need to be carefully edited) and the abrupt introduction of various pov(s) towards the end (it was very out-of-the-blue and derailed from the established pov, especially jason's and billy's, which i thought were redundant to the story), your piece was able to conjure emotions and empathy from the reader toward the characters and actually contained good plot underneath all that porny sex, which i haven't decided if this element is good or bad, =). I'm sure your story-telling skill will mature with time. Keep on writing. |
| Mari 2007-08-02 ch 17, | I'm so happy for having come across this fic even though it was written so long ago. It's just...perfect. I'm speechless. I can't stop thinking about it. Chris and Brandon are amazing characters and their relationship is so well-written, so...real. I was rooting for them until the end and you didn't disappoint. :) I just wanted to let you know I LOVE this fic. |
| Back of Beyond 2007-05-05 ch 17, | Amazing story and a great ending. ^^ |
| Werehuntress 2007-04-05 ch 4, | Damn i almost cryed at the end *sniff* I'm so sorry it's over :( I just don't have the words to describe that fic. It was just PERFECT! |
| total vintage 2007-02-25 ch 6, | AWESOME I LOVE THIS STORY! WHOO! |
| Cokii 2006-12-30 ch 17, | wow that was great i can't believe that chris said he loved brandon. i was a bit confused how p.o.v.s jumped around a bit but as you said it works |
| atreyu love 2006-12-04 ch 10, | hmm. |
| atreyu love 2006-12-04 ch 3, | again. wow. |
| atreyu love 2006-12-04 ch 1, | wow. |
| NOT YOU STORY 2006-11-26 ch 1, | I've read this story in full somewhere else. I've also read the author's other stories all written with the same style, which your stories have not been, which kinda makes me think that you didn't write this story. and you claim that you've had it written on paper for months and typed it all at once then posted it? it was on the internet for months before you posted it on here. why do you feel the need to PLAGERIZE? do you get some sort of satisfaction from nice reviews that comment on something you NEVER ACTUALLY WROTE? |
| Ki'alla 2006-09-12 ch 1, | hey its me again. i wanted to let you know that u are an amazing writer. i stayed up last night untill 4:30 reading this story, i couldnt put it down. Please continue writing. |
| Kuilu 2006-09-01 ch 11, | Oh, so sad...My eyes are watering. You write angst so well! |
| Kuilu 2006-09-01 ch 1, | "What is going on in here?"Well, isn't it obvious?One can only go so far in life without being able to recognise certain things. BTW... your writing style is dirty. dirtydirtydirty. You give a whole new element to realism. I've never read such blunt slash in my life. ~Meant to be a compliment, you know? >__ |
| Ryu 2006-08-10 ch 17, | That was intense. I hv read other sappy stories that proved the point that i wasted my time reading them in the first place. Let me tell you that your story was brilliant, you paid close attention to all the details of each character making them come alive n delude me into thinking that these characters were real. keep it up i know that ur're good.. the only thing is.. do u know that ur're good? (^_^) |