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| Lain Shadow 2005-03-12 ch 1,   | Short and sweet, I like how you use love at the end for a happy ending. Everyone say it with me...AW*tee hee* |
| Sagaciouspnay 2005-03-11 ch 1, | Wow. Impressive Poem. I like how you use FDDLL to represent all these feelings. I especially *love* the last part ~_^- I'm here for ya my carb ::hugs:: Keep on writing my soon-to-be writer!xox Rice G. |
| and calliope said 2005-03-11 ch 1, | I love how you described desire as mocking. You hit on the perfect word pair there. |