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| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2005-03-29 ch 1,  | *WOW* This is really powerful. I love all the description, the character. The emotions take on a life of their own. Terrific job! |
| ossining 2005-03-19 ch 1,  | This is really gorgeous. I love it. |
| Chels Chels 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Ha! I understood your reason for using wax, go me! - Silliness aside, I'm very impressed with how your poems are more personalized now...Your previous ones that I've read were poking fun at things, this one feels more on the serious side, but still a little bit of your usual humor involved. Though, I have to say this poem sounds like it's aimed at someone in particular - the usual person I guess? (Tell me if I'm wrong!) |
| Unkown 2005-03-13 ch 1, | This mask that is spoken of, is it pain, hatred, misery, or a combination of these and more. |
| kurai-kitsune 2005-03-11 ch 1, | the way you used the wax was interesting. before I read the A/N, I thoguht it was about how people can mold. wax can harden and wax can soften. the way you used it was unexpected, but made a lot of sense to me, it was awesome. |