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| cling peach 2005-10-31 ch 1,  | abuseWow… that was poignant. The emotions were really strong and you made the rhyming good- it didn't take away from the theme and make it silly. The ending was awfully sad, but beautiful in a way. (Not saying I agree with suicide or anything.) Anyway, great work, keep writing! ^.^ |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really powerful. Such an interesting perspective from someone commiting suicide. I loved the irony of it. The person finally realizing that it wasn't their fault and yet still longing for the release of death. *applauds* |
| ossining 2005-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, powerful stuff. Nice job. |