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| Macca Lane 2005-03-13 ch 1,   | love it nice like the eprosaiton of the sea devent haiku it is kind of traidonal if oyu wrere going to be weird and look into haikus beucase they are suepd to be abot htings like the sea and iamges and al that ** but you do add something kind of extra to it which amkes it a great haiku sorry for obirngyou it is jsut hat i am up to my bals learning about tehclany thing sot do with poetry with my uni work |
| Ivriniel 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Nice. I like the "golden sea". ^_^ |