Another amazing poem. I love how discriptive your phrases are. Very inspirational, makes me wish I could write poetry.

very prettily done, i muchly like this one as well, im a tired fool though so dont take my comments for anything, but its interesting that you actually told people to look up fey,i dunno, beautifully done

*we carved your shadows on desert ashes as a symbol for your requiem*

oh, lovely, lovely. ethereal word choice and stunning imagery. i loved the style

Beautiful! Awesome! Incredible! They haven't invented a word to describe this poem. I love your adjectives, they conjure beautiful imagery. I especially love the metal/stone references in the first stanza.

A very beautiful poem, I love the wording and the flow. Very well written

Really lovely. I love the imagery in this.

Wonderful ending. amazing language. great imagry. just, great.

quite a few of my favorite words are in here (: i liked the obsidian/jade/lapis lazuli/alabaster/indigo sequence.

lovely lovely diction.

This - this was a breaktaking, beyond words, gorgeous work of art! I.. I'm still gasping over it. The imagery, the words, the flow of this piece simply blew me away...

beautiful! lovely choice of words, so magical ^-^

wats dies irae?

This is gorgeous... The way it just flows. I could taste the words on my tongue. Beautiful.

fay liturgy enchants a lay man,

with words in latin sung as in mass,

calling out a spirit trinity,

that defines our deepest wishes fair,

¿O-Where's Chromatic Iridescence?

so leprechaun we can hunt for gold,

hidden at a rainbow arch's end,

coins and jewels red heart desires,

soft touches, gentle words,—roses pink.

beautiful piece. wonderful imagery, i liked your repeated use of names of stones/minerals. awesome use of alliteration as well. i love this. awesome work. keep writing!

i definitely needed a dictionary for this one. it's such a wonderful combo of complex words, like an undescribable feeling that is being attempted. that may not have been your intention, but that's what i picked up. very well written =0)

Wow...omg I love this so much! I love how you wrote it in archaic English almost, the expressions, the imagery...it's all mind-blowing! you should get your stuff published! It's sad and makes perfect sense (unlike, I have to admit, some of your other poems, lol) and it's simply PERFECT! Love, Mia