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| n- 2008-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseb r i l l i a n t. |
| just give me november 2007-09-26 ch 6,  | abusei really, really like this. but i hasn't been updated in two years :/ |
| super happy nuclear girl 2007-05-27 ch 6, | abuseThis was so disturbing. And you wrote it beautifully, I must say. You have such a nice play on words, manipulation of imagery which is really beautiful. I loved it a lot, really. It is so stark, but in a poetic way, if you get me. Anyway. Really, this is brilliant. |
| one2345 2007-05-07 ch 6, | abuseOh, this is so touching. Very well written, especially how her caring for him lead to him passing out in the kitchen, i love this, please update soon. |
| chocolatemusic 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. Umm, just, wow. You wrote it in such a way that I can see it, I can almost even understand it. cm |
| Aquafied 2006-11-06 ch 6, | abuseso odd. there is a skinny boy at my education facility of the same name. he is half a boy, so small. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-06 ch 5, | abusedont most feeding tubes go into your throat,er, upper chestal region? |
| Aquafied 2006-11-06 ch 4, | abusehands of a stanger. or brother? |
| Aquafied 2006-11-06 ch 3, | abuseticktock. |
| Aquafied 2006-11-06 ch 2, | abusethat is quite cruel but this is so intruiging |
| Aquafied 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abusethat is quite horrifying. |
| call me ish 2006-07-30 ch 6, | abuseWow... I'm just in.. stunned silence, maybe even awe? Speechless really. Just..., wow a great job... |
| Killing Karma 2006-05-26 ch 6, | abuseIt makes me sad, because I'm in the same situation, and I fear this is the road I'm heading (all over again).. It's good.. and real... |
| lovelikeamixtape 2006-05-20 ch 6, | abuseit scares me how much i can relate to everything this boy is thinking. you make this so personal, so detailed, so REAL that it's almost impossible not to. amazingamazing. please keep writing. |
| Tammy 2006-01-21 ch 6, anon. | abuse...Wow. That was chillingly amazing. The only suggestion I have is to combine some of the sections so that each chapter is longer. Other than that... The words, everything is just slightly *twisted*, reflecting Blaine's skewed thought processes. Excellent work. Is this the ending? |