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| Tiffany Baughman 2005-05-18 ch 1,  | Angel? who were you talking about...you know my email address, it's on your msn. lol. i wish you wouldn't talk the way you do in the rest of your poems... it hurts, and tears well up in my eyes. |
| firewitch1soulwriter 2005-03-12 ch 1,  | I know exactally what you mean. -Britt ^^ |
| AllyCred 2005-03-12 ch 1, | i like this the honesty you have put into these words is amazing...i know how this feels and its very painful, but i'm sure you'll get through...i think punctuation in this will help the reader to know when to stop and when the lines run on...but very well written...i like it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |