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| queenE12992 2008-11-18 ch 9,   | This is a really good story so far. I am really enjoying it and can't wait to read more. |
| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-11-12 ch 19, | hiya great story. angel |
| morexforxme 2008-11-01 ch 19, | Great ending! You were right about all the charges against Derek- except that he should have about ten attempted murder charges against him, for all the shooting, which should put him in jail for life. |
| morexforxme 2008-11-01 ch 12, | I love your story! The only problem is- Ty seems so oblivious! He didn't get angry at Jessie for dumping food on Rachel, but he did at Rachel for dumping food on Jessie! Shouldn't that make them equally evil to each other? Sure, he likes Jessie better, that much is obvious, but realistically, any guy would have realized that both of them are in the wrong. Jessie was just as awful to Rachel as Rachel was to her. It'd be more realistic if Jessie was more angelic, or Rachel much more evil. Other that little thing, though, I love it! morexforxme |
| Erora 2008-10-16 ch 2, | Another good one! |
| Santana 2008-10-13 ch 1, | hi. great story but you have allot of spelling and grammatical errors. I love the storyline though. |
| mistress tee 2008-09-21 ch 19, | positively loved this story and am about to read the next one! Yay! |
| MissPriss 2008-09-14 ch 19, | See, this is what happens when I don't look at the author's profile before I comment on a story. LOL, I'm going to read the sequel now! |
| MissPriss 2008-09-14 ch 19, | That was amazing! Great job, though I wish there had been an extra chapter or a sequel to see if they married or anything (hint!) |
| April 2008-03-11 ch 19, | AWESOME story!! I loved it! I really loved it that you let Jessie have hang-ups about physical intimacy. So often writers forget that physical abuse leaves emotional scars too. I don't know what else to say except GREAT JOB!! |
| cherrystraw 2008-01-07 ch 19, | cute and sweet... with angst of course! great story! can't wait to read more of your work! |
| Miss. Paradox 2007-07-30 ch 19, | Great story. I don't have much to say other that I loved it! Good job on it. |
| greenfoundation 2007-02-01 ch 19, | Yay! This one made me happy at the end and I didn't cry which is good ... That sounded very childish, hehe. Your stories and one shots are amazing! haha. Well, bye! |
| Kigono 2006-03-02 ch 19, | good story igtg rlly quick, but it was good, very realistic. :-) |
| j.m.burford 2006-01-10 ch 19, | This has turned out to be a very well written story. I related in so many ways...My dad died, my step dad abused us in many ways, he was an alcoholic and on many occassions the police were involved. I was just lucky that I had my darling nana to help me and that I escaped as quickly as possible four years ago. You managed to capture so much realism it is as though it came from first hand experience. Very insightful..Good luck throughout life. |