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| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-07-25 ch 1,   | O... simply beautiful! I love the ending. =D Maranwe Telrunya |
| Ellerfru 2006-04-29 ch 1, | Sad - but very beautiful. |
| Evelyn Tan 2006-04-28 ch 1, | This is so touching. I love the way you wrote the first few stanzas. =) Hm... there are a few grammar errors though, but I think they're insignificant to your brilliant phrasing and choice of words. =) Thank you for comment as well! -hugs- |
| Singing After Dark 2006-04-21 ch 1, | that was positively "divine." i almost cried it was so good! love the almost flashback in the beginning. they seem like two seperate stories but they are not so far apart. the connection i apparent once you become lost in the words. beautiful, touching, and i love that i'm a hopeless romantic! |
| no vicarious solace 2006-01-19 ch 1, | It is profoudly powerful; the emotions channelled here are effectively delivered. Emotions embedded in the poem are well-depicted. Such a captivating poem. Simply Superb. Lastly, thanks for the review. hope you see you more. |
| Lady Sakaki 2006-01-11 ch 1, | Wow...that was amazing. This poem triggered so many emotions in me!! You played with my feelings!! I was drowning under sorrow in the beginning, then in the middle I was starting to question life itself..."...their life beyond death,memories beyond life, life beyond remembering.Death is where the beginning lies, or so the words of wisdom from a wiseman's mouth thought to fly, surely life and deathare but Immortality in disguise?"Amazing...I can't begin to describe how those words made me feel...I don't even know what it was that they touched inside me...Heh...sorry I sound all weird now! But then, I found hope and happiness at the end of your poem!! ^-^ Sorry to freak you out!! o.o I'm weird like that. I think it's of all the anime and manga I "inject" to my brain. Awesome read, I enjoyed it! P.S. thanks for reviewing my poem, "Solitude" (I think it was that one...hehe...^-^) Thanks again! |
| JeiKitten 2005-09-07 ch 1, | *cheers* Wow, you've gotten amazing since you first commented on my...thing. With. Angst and silver haired angel bishie. :D *If you even remember* XD Check it out, I'm so adding you. |
| Osunale 2005-05-14 ch 1, | For so very little it says quite a bit more. Very pretty. |
| Starry Eyed Bunny 2005-03-13 ch 1, | This is really amazing. I think you have a good writing style and I enjoyed the love in this poem that you made.God Bless Starry Night Sky |
| Caim 2005-03-12 ch 1, | That was quite angsty now wasn't it! I really enjoyed it - very beautiful style. I loved the words and the flow of the poem - Also I am grateful for your review. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-11 ch 1, | Wow. Really wow material. Your words sewed me into the atmosphere. I want to play bongoes in the background. |