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| Manuel Fajar 2005-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseInterestingly enough I thought you were going to take the bigger on the inside than the outside to go into a whole new realm. Sort of a la "Alice in Wonderland,"—think about it. But plots are what you choose. Be that as it may—recommend more details to draw the reader in—what type of couch? what does it smell like? is the dog on there with you? or do dogs make you allergic so you have a siamese? does one couch leg make it wobble? is the book thin, full of pictures, old script ... ? etc., etc.. m |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI read this and I think it is very nice and makes me feel warm inside to see a fellow writer, write so nicely. I love the way you the words flow as if the words are telling this story and not the writer. great work! by the way, you're welcome to read my story, "Behind Friendship Lines" sorry if it sounds like CCS, it's cuz my mind was on my friend's story so I may accident make it sound like that haha. |
| Kurry Kurishi 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very very good writing. And the message is wonderful too...good for you to go for your dreams and I wish you all the luck in the world in getting there. ^_^ Kurry |
| Stories-have-souls 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is like my dream. Fantasising about having a book published is all I ever do, apart from writing. Great essay, loved reading it. |
| Cobalt Ito 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. Something of this calibur was what I wanted to read after being away from this site for so long (2-3 years at least). I hope to get that same feeling if I ever make it as an author. The thought of "even a hundred years after I'm gone, people will remember me by this." Whew, good stuff. |