Reviews for Message in a Bottle

piewolvesandsuch 2006-02-09 ch 1,	Purely beautiful, like the ocean itself. You amaze me. Nuff said.
Ghost_Spark 2006-02-09 ch 1,	I love this! it's so imaginative..and the choice of words! unbelieveable ^^
thedarkthatiwas 2005-04-20 ch 1,	Yes it was good! The imagery is great and it really sums up the ocean, not just what you see but what you feel... v/good! I like!
A Heart of Blades 2005-03-12 ch 1,	mouth drops That was awsome! That has to be your best poem yet! I just loved it, and the flow of the words was just beautiful.
grim-dreamer 2005-03-11 ch 1,	You call this short? It's short and beautifully atmospheric! I could visualise very easily the location you were describing. It resounds with deep affection and it echoed the view of Cardigan Bay, where I currently live, a place your words have laid down in words (even though you probably didn't mean to). You bring in the right contrasts in each stanza, example, in the opening stanza. 'They cover the shore beautifully/and back(ward) tehy flow' might work better for your metre, do you think? What a lovely, lovely poem...
dustytiger 2005-03-11 ch 1,	wow, this was really good, i liked it a lot, i could see the story unfold, good work, thank you for sharing
Serendipitous Passage 2005-03-11 ch 1,	This is beautifully writtin. I like the simple rhyming scheme. Your word choice is supurb and it fits the ocean that you are writing about. I love the poem. please R&R some of my wrok. I'll return the favor.