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pandaspots 2007-05-14 ch 1,	I love how this feels so detatched, and this is one of my favorite lines; "It was a misty morning, wetness hanging in the air lazily." This is a really good piece. A oneshot?
IgnitedIcicle 2005-04-29 ch 1,	it has an air to it like he is detached to the reality of jeremy hurting him, and being bad to him because it is familiar, like a flashback of sorts, and it could feel good that way. real good.
Karmachanic 2005-04-25 ch 1,	You've been on my author's list for awhile now, and I thought it would be a good idea to review and tell you why. So, here it goes: I like this story a lot because it takes you into the darker side of relationships that most people don't think exist. I like this because, not only is it overflowing with discriptive language, but the beginning pulls the reader in, as does the summary, and they are certainly not let down. I hope that this isn't a one-shot, though it would make a good one, I would love it if you were to continue! If not, just let it be known that your stuff is really good and I hope that you write a whole lot more!
Bukowski Is 2005-03-13 ch 1,	Oh. Wow. Dark, beautiful, mysterious, exciting. This is amazing. I like it! Nice work.
and flowers 2005-03-12 ch 1,	it's always easiest to have no back-bone in the situation, instead of standing up for yourself. but i almost feel like he's helpless to what's happening.