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Anna178 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
I love the ending, and its very true to me. beautiful. I love the raw emotion of your poems.

ANNA
lordelfy 2005-07-06 . chapter 1
wow...this is awesome...i think this is my favorite = )
i-rite-gud 2005-07-01 . chapter 1
I feel like I just want to scream sometimes... So I do... It only usually makes it worse for me though...
misery re 2005-06-21 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Just wondering about a couple lines though: "In such a way that all the would could hear." Do you mean "world" instead of "would"? Then: "I want to bury my face inmy pillow" just wanted to let you know that "in my" collided.
Betty72 2005-05-31 . chapter 1
Goddamn do I wish I had your talent. You truly do have a way with words, a way that seems to make even the most heartbreaking a moment eloquent and beautiful. Sorry it took so long to read your work, but it truly is amazing. Keep it up!
estrela 2005-05-19 . chapter 1
a while ago, my group of friends was having serious issues, and i either wanted to yell at someone or just go somewhere and cry... this poem is exactly how i felt! nice job.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-05-16 . chapter 1
I know exactly how you felt. I felt the same a while ago.This was a great poem, so realistic.R&R sum of mi work, and i shall return the favour ^_^
Ember's Fire 2005-05-11 . chapter 1
wow. this was practiacally screaming emotion all on its own, very good writing. some poems i read (maybe mine included) are sort of - hollow. but it's not like i'm one to talk so i'll just shush up now. (Thanks very muchas for the review) ~Ember's Fire~
angelfromurnightmare 2005-04-29 . chapter 1
this is really good! i can totally relate. guys who use girls really need a reality check (and a gun to the head lol). keep this up, i love poetic writing like this!
RainingAllTheTime 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
This poem has lots of emotion and I really like it. You expressed your feelings well. Nice job.
chewing GUM 2005-04-19 . chapter 1
very good. i like it
Broadway Doll 2005-04-18 . chapter 1
This is really, really powerful. : | Amazing job.

P.S. Thank you for reviewing my monologue. You told me EXACTLY what I wanted to hear. Disturbing - that's absurdism for you. Anyway, now all I need is some creepy chants to make it really avante garde.

Again, your poem is really good.
PinkSnowflakes 2005-04-17 . chapter 1
Nice poem! It was really angsty (in a good way) and meaningful. I liked it. ^^
Black Pen 2005-04-13 . chapter 1
very sad but very good at the same time! great job with this.
Korbin Blackheart 2005-04-12 . chapter 1
Very powerful, I can feel the desperation in this one.
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