I love the ending, and its very true to me. beautiful. I love the raw emotion of your poems.

ANNA

wow...this is awesome...i think this is my favorite = )

I feel like I just want to scream sometimes... So I do... It only usually makes it worse for me though...

Wonderful. Just wondering about a couple lines though: "In such a way that all the would could hear." Do you mean "world" instead of "would"? Then: "I want to bury my face inmy pillow" just wanted to let you know that "in my" collided.

Goddamn do I wish I had your talent. You truly do have a way with words, a way that seems to make even the most heartbreaking a moment eloquent and beautiful. Sorry it took so long to read your work, but it truly is amazing. Keep it up!

a while ago, my group of friends was having serious issues, and i either wanted to yell at someone or just go somewhere and cry... this poem is exactly how i felt! nice job.

I know exactly how you felt. I felt the same a while ago.This was a great poem, so realistic.R&R sum of mi work, and i shall return the favour ^_^

wow. this was practiacally screaming emotion all on its own, very good writing. some poems i read (maybe mine included) are sort of - hollow. but it's not like i'm one to talk so i'll just shush up now. (Thanks very muchas for the review) ~Ember's Fire~

this is really good! i can totally relate. guys who use girls really need a reality check (and a gun to the head lol). keep this up, i love poetic writing like this!

This poem has lots of emotion and I really like it. You expressed your feelings well. Nice job.

very good. i like it

This is really, really powerful. : | Amazing job.

P.S. Thank you for reviewing my monologue. You told me EXACTLY what I wanted to hear. Disturbing - that's absurdism for you. Anyway, now all I need is some creepy chants to make it really avante garde.

Again, your poem is really good.

Nice poem! It was really angsty (in a good way) and meaningful. I liked it. ^^

very sad but very good at the same time! great job with this.

Very powerful, I can feel the desperation in this one.