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| Anna178 2005-08-21 ch 1,   | I love the ending, and its very true to me. beautiful. I love the raw emotion of your poems. ANNA |
| lordelfy 2005-07-06 ch 1, | wow...this is awesome...i think this is my favorite = ) |
| i-rite-gud 2005-07-01 ch 1, | I feel like I just want to scream sometimes... So I do... It only usually makes it worse for me though... |
| misery re 2005-06-21 ch 1, | Wonderful. Just wondering about a couple lines though: "In such a way that all the would could hear." Do you mean "world" instead of "would"? Then: "I want to bury my face inmy pillow" just wanted to let you know that "in my" collided. |
| Betty72 2005-05-31 ch 1, | Goddamn do I wish I had your talent. You truly do have a way with words, a way that seems to make even the most heartbreaking a moment eloquent and beautiful. Sorry it took so long to read your work, but it truly is amazing. Keep it up! |
| estrela 2005-05-19 ch 1, | a while ago, my group of friends was having serious issues, and i either wanted to yell at someone or just go somewhere and cry... this poem is exactly how i felt! nice job. |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-05-16 ch 1, | I know exactly how you felt. I felt the same a while ago.This was a great poem, so realistic.R&R sum of mi work, and i shall return the favour ^_^ |
| Ember's Fire 2005-05-11 ch 1, | wow. this was practiacally screaming emotion all on its own, very good writing. some poems i read (maybe mine included) are sort of - hollow. but it's not like i'm one to talk so i'll just shush up now. (Thanks very muchas for the review) ~Ember's Fire~ |
| angelfromurnightmare 2005-04-29 ch 1, | this is really good! i can totally relate. guys who use girls really need a reality check (and a gun to the head lol). keep this up, i love poetic writing like this! |
| RainingAllTheTime 2005-04-19 ch 1, | This poem has lots of emotion and I really like it. You expressed your feelings well. Nice job. |
| chewing GUM 2005-04-19 ch 1, | very good. i like it |
| Broadway Doll 2005-04-18 ch 1, | This is really, really powerful. : | Amazing job. P.S. Thank you for reviewing my monologue. You told me EXACTLY what I wanted to hear. Disturbing - that's absurdism for you. Anyway, now all I need is some creepy chants to make it really avante garde. Again, your poem is really good. |
| PinkSnowflakes 2005-04-17 ch 1, | Nice poem! It was really angsty (in a good way) and meaningful. I liked it. ^^ |
| Black Pen 2005-04-13 ch 1, | very sad but very good at the same time! great job with this. |
| Korbin Blackheart 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Very powerful, I can feel the desperation in this one. |