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| Washer 2005-03-14 ch 3,   | Good writing. Make more. I have so decreed. |
| Arsene 2005-03-12 ch 1, | Dude, the begginings of both chapters are copies of Ender's Game. Fix this. Otherwise, the characters are good and is nicely written |
| Arkash 2005-03-12 ch 1, | An interesting beginning, I'm curious to see where it leads. Pretty good characters,too. |