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| ShadowPharoh 2005-06-23 ch 1,   | i really enjoyed reading this. great poem, greatER poet! SP |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-05-03 ch 1, | this is unique. I've never heard of something like this before. but very good. Thank you for the review. ~Sorrow~ |
| Karma Chameleon 2005-04-09 ch 1, | For some reason I really liked this, though I do not think I have a clue what's going on... Confusing, but entertaining. To me, that qualifies as a great job... ~Karma Chameleon |
| Lisa Parry 2005-04-06 ch 1, | Confusing, what with such a strong start but there was an impulse driving this poem on that made it highly dramatic. I also liked the line in brackets, left you in a moment of expectation (or bathos :) |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-04-02 ch 1, | interesting structure, love the ending x weasel within x |
| method acting 2005-03-12 ch 1, | very good. I liked how it was sorta two people (or two sides of one person) it was very good. :-) |