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| method acting 2005-08-15 ch 3,   | Nice. Very interesting. Lovey descriptions. Good job. |
| ShadowPharoh 2005-06-23 ch 1, | i love yoga! excellent words and excellent poem. SP |
| pneumothorax 2005-06-05 ch 1, | The 'crack' was slightly ominous. Anti-yoga? Breathe was interesting with this, as if the sufferign was over. |
| Johana O 2005-05-19 ch 1, | AHH I do Yoga too! Yoga rules |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-17 ch 3, | *laughs* aren't soaps entertaining? |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-17 ch 2, | There are some errors in spelling with "ist" and "mving" but besides that, this is very nice. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-04-17 ch 1, | I'd love to take yoga. |
| citrus scented 2005-04-13 ch 1, | hehe cute poem! I love the style used, the short words...give a instructive feel and that really gets the feel of yoga across! Nice one. |
| youzi 2005-04-10 ch 1, | Haha..not sure if this was supposed to be a humour piece..but it sure made me smile. Keep writing =D |
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 2005-04-02 ch 1, | Ah, I feel relaxed while going thru your poem. good one! |
| Black Desire 2005-04-02 ch 1, | Thanks for the reviews that was really gunny to me. Signed, A Lost Angel In Hiding |
| Cadience Gemma Topaz 2005-03-23 ch 1, | Lol, this is a cute one, short and straight to the point. |
| born-again 2005-03-21 ch 1, | Cool poem, the choice of diction is great. |
| aknightsgoldenrose 2005-03-14 ch 3, | Nice poems. Of the three I think my favorite one would have to be Yoga becuase thats what I think of when I think about yoga. Nice work. |