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| youzi 2005-07-31 ch 1,   | the ending line really caught my eye.. liked how you built this piece up. keep writing =D |
| ode to a firefly 2005-05-12 ch 1, | I'm feeling pretty much the same way. I'm fed up with school, teachers, and half of my friends. I just would like to sit at home all alone playing guitar for about 5 days. Maybe then return to "real life." Overall, this is a great poem with good description. :) ~TPC~ |
| Kaywyn 2005-04-23 ch 1, | you seem to know right where to repeat in this one...very very nice...and I forgot to say in nights and hallways I like the emphisis with the "and blood trickled..." just wanted top let you know that... |
| aknightsgoldenrose 2005-04-16 ch 1, | Nice poem. I really liked the last line. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-04-12 ch 1, | aw... life is but one big adventure isn't it?^^ cute poem~~ keep writing! |
| MaskedMarionette 2005-04-08 ch 1, | me likey... er... i like the flow |
| Freddie of Albion 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Very descriptive. A powerful message.Well done! |