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| Reviews for Gone for now |
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   youzi 7/31/05 . chapter 1the ending line really caught my eye.. liked how you built this piece up. keep writing D |
| ode to a firefly 5/12/05 . chapter 1 I'm feeling pretty much the same way. I'm fed up with school, teachers, and half of my friends. I just would like to sit at home all alone playing guitar for about 5 days. Maybe then return to "real life." Overall, this is a great poem with good description. :) TPC |
| Kaywyn 4/23/05 . chapter 1 you seem to know right where to repeat in this one...very very nice...and I forgot to say in nights and hallways I like the emphisis with the "and blood trickled..." just wanted top let you know that... |
| aknightsgoldenrose 4/16/05 . chapter 1 Nice poem. I really liked the last line. |
| mizu no kokoro 4/12/05 . chapter 1 aw... life is but one big adventure isn't it? cute poem keep writing! |
| MaskedMarionette 4/8/05 . chapter 1 me likey... er... i like the flow |
| Freddie of Albion 3/15/05 . chapter 1 Very descriptive. A powerful done! |
