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| KaronePrincess 2007-11-13 ch 15,   | hello, I love your writing style soo much. Very well descritpive and the characters are charming. Thanks for writing this great story. Good luck writing in the future! Thanks, KaronePrincess |
| Asaya 2005-04-28 ch 15, | This may be one of the most captivating stories I've read around here, and one of the very few (two or three, perhaps) on Fictionpress I have ever reviewed. Yes, I'm lazy like that, and I'm actually quite embarrassed about it right now. I'm also trying to give you a compliment through that little fact. ;) Honestly, you've written such a beautiful tale that I couldn't resist writing something - plus, you deserve a lot more reviews than you have received. Two reviews so far from a single reader? I'm surprised, really. I'm a perfectionist and as such, like to criticise. However, I can't think of any real flaws. You have a beautiful writing style, descriptive but not overdone, and it flows perfectly well. If I had to name something, though, there would be just one single thing that bothered me: the prince. Why did he act *that* hostile towards Echo? I understand that the visit at his castle was probably necessary for Echo's and Syrin's relationship to develop as well as for that other turn of events... yet I think the prince could have very well been left out. I hope to see more fantasy stories from you. Keep up the great work. ~ Asaya |
| Silent Aislynn 2005-04-03 ch 15, | aw this is amazing! i loved it. you had me on the edge of my seat with the battle and the Oracle. damn... what a great writer you are, i so love this story. when i read the bio i thought that it was Lyric Echo and their mother i didnt dream it was another sister, and the mythology with the Gods and Dragons.. awesome. how did you think to make it like that? seriously this is geneous. keep up the good work. ill be looking forward to seeing the rest of your works. nik |
| Silent Aislynn 2005-03-31 ch 2, | wow... i started this at school (when the teacher wasnt looking) and i just cant believe i found an amazing story like this. usually i go for the R ratings but this is so good im going to keep reading. ill be back tomorrow to finish all the chapters. then give you a giant review! well talk soon. nik |