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| Noir Fleurir 2005-11-01 ch 1,   | kinda on the deepside of the waters, like it a lot, thanks for the review:-) |
| Serana 2005-06-11 ch 1, | Ok... despite whatever you think about your own poetry, this is the one that I really like (and probably the one that started my endless plugging) The lines are short but powerful, with many words taking on a second meaning rather than its own. What I particularly like about it is the way that it can be viewed not only from the POV of the toy but also in the POV of many other people in different circumstances. Great work with it. Continue writing please. You know what I'm waiting for... ;) |
| Meli-dear 2005-05-12 ch 1, | This has sad written all over it ;_; Very good writing, and how you can inteprent it in so many ways. I like this piece, it gives a very deep feeling about the meaning of things, or that's how it feels to me |
| Dumon 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Nice imagery, word choices were good. I admire your work very nice. The only critisism is maybe improving your vocabulary you have the right idea and how it should flow. All I think that you need is words to express what you write. otherwise damn good job keep it up. thanx for reviewing me ^_^ |
| KimEh-3 2005-04-07 ch 1, | Good job! This is the first piece of writing I've read from you, and I'm very impressed. :D |
| Kiera Jackston 2005-03-19 ch 1, | Hmm, I can think of several interpretations, and all of them sad. But its good, and I like it. |
| toxic-kitten 2005-03-18 ch 1, | Great poem, i like how it may have a different meaning for each different person. Thanks for reveiwing my story, it helped alot. |
| Sympah 2005-03-16 ch 1, | I loved the metaphor of a toy you used. Sometimes I also feel like that...People are stupid... |
| Tyanna 2005-03-14 ch 1, | a interesting take on it...at first I though you spoke of a father leaving a child behind...then I thought more of someone being left for another lover... then it turns out to be a toy. very well written. A+ in my books :P |