|Reviews for Undone|
| godsgurl 3/30/05 . chapter 1
i love how every the first line of every stanza was the same. Really awesome, i love how you compared your broken heart to shattered glass. i really love it.
| SayIt'sWrong 3/28/05 . chapter 1
Hey, this is really good. The flow is great, the wording is original and the rhyming scheme is amazing. Good job! QueenVixta
| Steel Winged Angel 3/14/05 . chapter 1
wow. This is really heartbreaking and angsty. I really liked this stanza:"I’ve come undoneYou ripped me apartI hope you cut yourselfOn the sharp piecesOf my broken heart"Very
| Crazy Biene 3/13/05 . chapter 1
who...very well written. loved it!
| simpleplan13 3/12/05 . chapter 1
wow very powerful & well written.. i love the stanza you repeated.. its brilliant
| AllyCred 3/12/05 . chapter 1
OMG...i have to say i love this poem i know how it is when stuff like this happens...but this is very well written and for me every single one of ur poems get better and better everytime and i love them all...well this is very good...i love it. lots of love AllyCred
| Karma Chameleon 3/12/05 . chapter 1
This is a good poem. I like the repitition, and the way you capture feeling. It makes me feel as if i were the one coming undone.