i love how every the first line of every stanza was the same. Really awesome, i love how you compared your broken heart to shattered glass. i really love it.

Hey, this is really good. The flow is great, the wording is original and the rhyming scheme is amazing. Good job! QueenVixta

wow. This is really heartbreaking and angsty. I really liked this stanza:"I’ve come undoneYou ripped me apartI hope you cut yourselfOn the sharp piecesOf my broken heart"Very

who...very well written. loved it!

wow very powerful & well written.. i love the stanza you repeated.. its brilliant

OMG...i have to say i love this poem i know how it is when stuff like this happens...but this is very well written and for me every single one of ur poems get better and better everytime and i love them all...well this is very good...i love it. lots of love AllyCred

This is a good poem. I like the repitition, and the way you capture feeling. It makes me feel as if i were the one coming undone.