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| Aslam 2005-08-10 ch 2,  | abuseoh...hehehe this is what u get when u cross artistic talent with a nerd :P |
| Aslam 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abuseheya, this was catchy! nice job with it... i didnt like the second one as much.maybe just cuz i didnt go that deep in2 physics. but i feel it didnt have some of the spark the 1st 1 did. none the less it was still ok |
| Venusvadore 2005-06-04 ch 2, | abuseI am wowed, and only sad that I couldn't read it sooner ^-^. I kinda got caught distracted, so know I have to catch up with reviews that I didn't get to give. This was great, and so different than most of the poems I read. It was a refreshing change. Loved it. |
| ONEthousandWORDs 2005-05-12 ch 2, | abuseTHIS is why I read "The Elegant Universe." Because it makes me feel like this poem does. The whole beauty and elegance and, in some ways, utter simplicity of EVERYTHING. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. Also a bit terrified, but mostly warm and fuzzy. Ancient astronomers were (possibly) more right that even they thought when they spoke of the "music of the spheres." ^_^ |
| Venusvadore 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseHmm...odd, but definatly good. I'm glad I chose to check out your things, you're really talented, and, if I might add, very good at correcting grammar, lol. But don't worry, that's definatly a good thing. |
| ONEthousandWORDs 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuse... I LOVE you. Ohemge. You see, I have a bit of a soft spot for physics. And I love writing, of course. (I am, after all, a member of fp.com.) This expresses my feeling so beautifully! And, while I can write prose, I am handicapped when it comes to writing poetry. It's a curse. So, really all I'm trying to say is -- multas gratias. |
| Selah Ex Animo 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! This was fun, and beautifully written! I like how you described the various aspects of physics - physics, correct? ::sigh:: Not being an aficinado of this field, I'm prone to make flagrant errors... :( - the rhyming scheme, and elegance of your writing. This was great! "Our universe is spinning/In a slow and stately gait." "Stars are pirouetting,/Twinkling out their distant light." Beautiful! - Selah |