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| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is such a sweet story. I really liked it. The characters seem very real and the story is realistic as well. Nice job :D |
| LulaR 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseGood twist! I like stories with background to them, makes the characters seem more 3-dimensional somehow :) |
| Cel M. 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseAwe. I loved it. Very romantic lol. |
| Seraph-of-Nightsong 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseaw! this story was so cute! i love it! ^-^ i just love how she had NO idea it was him... and then remembered after he hinted to her... and then they end up getting married! haha.. after she was such a ** to him too lol... it's great! ^-^ i love it.. it greatly amused me ^-^ it's awesome |
| vermillion-dream 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseGotta love a happy ending. I like it I think it would have made a great full length story, but maybe it was made for just a short story.Peace, love, and happy days.~Vermillion. |
| nightlystar 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abusesuch a sweet story |
| ellabella 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseoh hell, i was going through old school photos the other day (pfft, the pics are like four years old) and i couldn't help but notice how child-like we looked (we're all like 17 and 18 now). then a thought came to mind as i saw my friend and her old boyfriend together and it really scared me...for the first time ever i was creeped out by my friends and the inner workings of a kids mind because said friend had been sleeping with her boyfriend at that age and she wasn't a virgin when she first met him either (an over share i know) and it really freaked me out something chronic. anyway i felt a complete and utter overwhelming "THANK GOD!" that i chose not to loose my virginity until i was in a really long and solid relationship and wanted to share that with someone. oh my god those pics creeps me out. this is a great story and i like the whole friends older brother thing. you took a moment out of life and wrote about it, it really helps to get bash the creaters block in half. sorry about the picture-story i rambled on about. i don't know how that story relates with your story but i just remembered and felt the need to share. no wonder it creeps me out when i see little kids doing that these days...my friends did it but i didn't find it creepy, i thought we were all mature and stuff... ...we so were not. ellabella |
| chelce 2005-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was so sweet! I liked it a lot! |
| wheey 2005-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello. First of all, I think your story has great potential. It has an interesting plot line and idea, but it doesn't have everything. It's very vague in a sense because and I didn't really see smooth transitions in the scene. I think you should expand on the story and make it so that we the readers can understand this promise that he made. I would love to see it longer! Otherwise, you have a great beginning! |
| Allison 2005-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi! It's me again! I likes this, very nice and fluffy. *waits for you to update My Personal Problem* Don't leave us hanging! Anyway, nice one shot, though I'm personally not a big fan of one shots. |
| lilylupin7 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseWow I like this story. By the way, I play French Horn as well and I love Meg Cabot and her Mediator series |