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| qblisa 2006-12-08 ch 1,   | While reading this I got an eerie feeling about being in a dark silent room illuminated only by my computer screen... Should I be afraid of the dark or the shadows I see, and allow my mind to play tricks on me? No really, while reading the poem I was well aware of my surroundings, which is rare when I'm on my computer. I like how you were able to elicit such an emotive response from me. I probably missed the whole point of the poem, but I'm sure each time I re-read it I will get something different out of it. Well written. Lisa |
| Dr. Painful 2005-03-27 ch 1, | I like this! It has a good flow! Would you read my storys? The first one is Sokato: Green Police Officer, read this one first. The next one is Sokato: The Dark Lord's Revenge, this is the sequel; read it next. |