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| Noihseret 2006-06-23 ch 1, | very good. ^^ it explains everything. you can defininately feel the emotion in this, but it doesn't give you much to think about. |
| swtdreamz101 2005-04-06 ch 1, | very poetic, with a touch of style, nice poem |
| satinsmoke 2005-03-17 ch 1, | wow...that was amazingly lovely. err, not lovely. um, lovely in scary way? uh, not scary either. lovely in a deep emotional way? hahaha...your poem cannot be described by words ;) anyway i really liked it! its short, but i think that that only adds to the effect. actually, thats the main reason i like it. your poem's concise and powerful...thats something i *gotta* learn sometime. =\ i tend to rant. a lot. oops, im ranting right now, arent i? hehe...anyway, i really liked it! the rhymes were really good too. write more! im always annoyed poems cant get updated. heh. |