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Reviews For: Trapped in myself

Noihseret
2006-06-23
ch 1,
very good. ^^ it explains everything. you can defininately feel the emotion in this, but it doesn't give you much to think about.
swtdreamz101
2005-04-06
ch 1,
very poetic, with a touch of style, nice poem
satinsmoke
2005-03-17
ch 1,
wow...that was amazingly lovely. err, not lovely. um, lovely in scary way? uh, not scary either. lovely in a deep emotional way?

hahaha...your poem cannot be described by words ;)

anyway i really liked it! its short, but i think that that only adds to the effect. actually, thats the main reason i like it. your poem's concise and powerful...thats something i *gotta* learn sometime. =\ i tend to rant. a lot.

oops, im ranting right now, arent i?

hehe...anyway, i really liked it! the rhymes were really good too. write more!

im always annoyed poems cant get updated. heh.
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