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| BunnyLilka 2008-12-01 ch 1,   | This is a very sweet story so far. Please update this as soon as you can, okay? I love it. |
| Iamet 2005-03-29 ch 1, | oh mah gawd XD! I was wondering when you are going to continue writing this story XD Good job Yumeh :3 I love the summary XD |
| Etteloicn 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Very nice story, indeed! I like it a lot, please continue. |
| chouchan 2005-03-13 ch 1, | wow...! i love your writing! i like the plotline too, i can't wait for the next chapter, i wonder if vi will fall in love with katana? o.O update! |
| Isolde Michi 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Wow!(In a daze)(shakes head)That was such a great chappie! I don't think I can give you any advice since your so good! (sweatdrops)(does a thumbs-up)Keep up the great work okay!(winks)Bah-bye!(waves off as runs into an bottomless hole) |
| Parsnip 2005-03-13 ch 1, | So nicely written! I love how you've already built Vi and Katana's relationship up already. Fighting and bickering always leads to great humor in my opinion. But that's just my opinion. I can't wait to see the next chapter and what new and interesting situtations you'll be putting your characters through! |
| cynical-idealist 2005-03-12 ch 1, | oh...that was so cool! Poor girl, always having to hide her true form. It must be getting pretty hard though. Now I wonder how Katana's arrival will jam the works. Update! |
| Earth-Angel4 2005-03-12 ch 1, | wow!! I loved it! ^^ And u really surprised me at the end. LoL well I thought it was a girl at first but like u kept using "he" so like yea...Well I'm looking forward to ur next chapter! I'm really curious on whats going to happen futhur into the story... p.s: sowwie I thought I could use my account from fanfiction and sign unto this site using my account but I guess not. But like thats my name on fanfiction so like yea ^^ |