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| Eva Lilac 2006-02-05 ch 1,  | abusePlease do continue! This is great, it really is. You're a wonderful writer; yout stories are all unique, and full of emotion. Keep up the good work! |
| bohtea 2005-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseof cuz u should continue! it sounds realli good=D |
| sealednectar 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseHmm, I like this one as well (like that's a surprise).I thought she was just here to steal things, why does she want to become the Queen? |
| W3DNESDAY 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseyes continue! your plotline is fascinating.. i must see the end of it!! |
| Crazy Wynona 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseHey! Sounds good so far! |
| jennycraig10 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abusei think this, following just behind Forgotten Autumn Nights, is my next favorite of your stories. why the heck did it take me forever to finally getting around to reading it? o wellz, i love it! update! |
| twistedFAerieTALes 2005-03-23 ch 1, | abuselol. luv ur writing and ideas-u should definitely continue it...just a suggestion/q to think about tho...WHY does she want to be queen? but im sure whatev. u write will be fine. update soon! ~Sage |
| DarkPegasiKnight 2005-03-18 ch 1, | abuseCan't really say much about the story unless you continue...so go ahead! |
| Brooke ORiley 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseok, so now that my brain is functioning properly, i am here to review! 'tis quite lovely. the fact that she's a thief instead of just a peasant or something makes me happy. aside from that, there's not too much to comment on, given how short it is. so all i shall say is, more please? |
| ProlificP 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseO, please do continue. This sounds promising and from the little I've seen I think I'm going to love the way you write. Crossing my fingers and hoping for more! Great beginning. |
| queen-lala 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseliked your idea^_^ please continue. |
| arachibutyrophobia 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseYes! I love it! Its already so suspenseful please please continue this! *puppy eyes* ~birdytamel~ ps. do u kno u dont accept anonymous reviews? |
| ErgoSchmergo 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNope, it wasn't boring. Quite intruiging in fact. Yes continue! |
| leylakedi 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseYou'd better continue! I can't wait until the next chapter. It's my favorite kind of fairy tale and I want to see how it turns out! |
| DaDel Amor 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNo it wasn't boring without dialogue a prologue is well better without dialogue. Good start! |