Please do continue! This is great, it really is. You're a wonderful writer; yout stories are all unique, and full of emotion. Keep up the good work!

of cuz u should continue! it sounds realli good=D

Hmm, I like this one as well (like that's a surprise).I thought she was just here to steal things, why does she want to become the Queen?

yes continue! your plotline is fascinating.. i must see the end of it!!

Hey! Sounds good so far!

i think this, following just behind Forgotten Autumn Nights, is my next favorite of your stories. why the heck did it take me forever to finally getting around to reading it? o wellz, i love it! update!

lol. luv ur writing and ideas-u should definitely continue it...just a suggestion/q to think about tho...WHY does she want to be queen? but im sure whatev. u write will be fine. update soon! ~Sage

Can't really say much about the story unless you continue...so go ahead!

ok, so now that my brain is functioning properly, i am here to review!

'tis quite lovely. the fact that she's a thief instead of just a peasant or something makes me happy. aside from that, there's not too much to comment on, given how short it is. so all i shall say is, more please?

O, please do continue. This sounds promising and from the little I've seen I think I'm going to love the way you write. Crossing my fingers and hoping for more! Great beginning.

liked your idea^_^ please continue.

Yes! I love it! Its already so suspenseful please please continue this! *puppy eyes*

~birdytamel~

ps. do u kno u dont accept anonymous reviews?

Nope, it wasn't boring. Quite intruiging in fact. Yes continue!

You'd better continue! I can't wait until the next chapter. It's my favorite kind of fairy tale and I want to see how it turns out!

No it wasn't boring without dialogue a prologue is well better without dialogue. Good start!