Aw.

gr, now i want a muffin. and we have no muffins. It was wonderful, as i knew it would be. =] well, I'm going to see if the gas station in town is still open at 11:07 pm. If so, i hope they have muffins!!
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Peace, Love, Laughter~
Lost~~

It's such a cute muffin muffin story! I love it!
I'm actually glad to see that it didn't end up with them in bed or something rather predictable. It's open ended I love it!
You write very interestingly, interestingly enough.

Now go, knowing that I heart you.

Incredibly original storyline and cute interaction.
Very adorable.
I would also post a review for your latest story but my internet connection is slow so:
It's so cute. I actually first thought your story was about the fathers River and Javier but then in came stalker-y Latin. ;O
I really like your mild slash fics.

I really enjoyed this oneshot.

You also used second person, which is barely ever taken out of the closet for writing...and it was refreshing.

You've made everything terrifyingly real in a way that I can't quite explain.

The bit I loved most was the ending; with the picture frames that aren't empty and the milk-tasting. God, I love you, you've done everything perfectly: the interjections by Jordan ("Flowers.", "Twenty.", "Canada.") to fill in the gaps.

What I like about Callum is the way he's direct ("Move", "Take the bag.") because you've really built him up as a character in this fairly short oneshot.

You should get this beta'd (I wouldn't mind doing it) or check it, I think...because you've done quite a lot of 'you mother'.

...I look forward to reading more from you.

YAY! Awesome! I love it!XD Jordan is cool and Callum seems to have a heart after all!XP

I love poppy seed muffins and God Callum was a bastard. He does a good job making it up, and I wish I could see how he gets around to tasting the dried paint on Jordan's fingers. lol. I like the way you wrote this.

Man, Callum's such a jerk at the beginning. But, since made up for it in the end, I forgive him!...Poor Jordan!

cutecutecute so very cute XD

short and sweet :]

Wow, that was awesome!!When I was reading it I forgot that it was a oneshot and then when I got to the bottom I was all sad and stuff!!:(

*reviews!* Cute. I love everything you write ^_^. You didn't stop writing completely, right? Just on fp.com?

I liked this. His personality was winning. 'and you somehow find yourself tasting the dried paint on his fingertips.' Interesting line, of many.

*tear* only one chapter! curse one-shots!

Good story. I loved the ending.