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| daphnegray78 2005-04-05 ch 1,   | Hauntingly beautiful and vivid. I think the best part about it is that it is realistic even in its hopelessly romantic ways. Instead of saying that you'll always be madly in love with her, you simply say that you will always love her, even if you guys move apart. And since I have a hard time writing realistic love poems, I give you kudos! ^_^ Well done! ~Daphne~ |
| Alma 2005-03-13 ch 1, | I like it because it is raw emotion. It is beautiful because it isn't concealed behind fancy metaphors or anything like that. Write more! |
| deli 2005-03-12 ch 1, | sad ^_^ |