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| Trinity Dragon 2006-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseThat was absolutely incredible. Good grammer, spelling, and other things. And the message is to die for. Litterally. I would do the same thing that Mikhail did, and I would do it without so much as a moment of hesitation. Dang fine job. Lord Pyro |
| snow blossoms 2005-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abusedude. that was beautiful. you kick **. |
| On Eagle's Wings 2005-04-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. Even if the original idea wasn't yours, you did a great job adapting it. Your style of writing was perfect for the story, and I really got a feel for the setting. Beautiful story. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is very emotional. Trye words spoken giving light and hope to the people. A very sad and touching ending. Great work! |
| Citharia 2005-03-19 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love it. ^^ It's quite sad, although I must say I've never heard of this story before. Like your writing style. Lots of emotions ejected, it seems...well done. One of the best historical stories I've seen. Great job! (thanks for reviewing my story, by the way, it was very uplifting^^) |
| Orangen 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. I've been interested in finding a good Christian story (there aren't enough of those), and I also like Spirituals in general, so this fits the bill quite nicely...So sad but so, so true... Really makes me hate History sometimes... Very important message here, though. |
| el pobre borracho 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was great, thanks - the first decent historical piece I've come across, and it was better than decent. It seemed complete, all around, no hanging threads... Well, that's about all I can say. |
| Sphynx 2005-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI've never heard that story before. . but we're learning about that in history right now, and it would have surprised me a bit. I applaud you for your writing style. It's nice, it's easy to follow and it's Christian, which is always a refreshing thing to find ^_^ |
| Lost in the Funhouse 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. This was very powerful and sad. It's interesting yo know that this was a true story. Very beautiful. I love your writing |
| lili brik 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseseriously true? seems a little drastic...but for the early days of red russia...eh, i guess it could have happened.as i have quite a fondness for both russians and christians, i liked this well. at the risk of sounding trite, it was quite powerful... |