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Reviews For: Wedding Day

k-b-cook
2005-04-14
ch 1,
Hmm bit of a strange topic, very original! A few spelling errors: She wanted to marry him toO.Tried to tell hiM to forgive her,

Also missing a comma: But she lost her world, her life her friends,

Otherwise very good!
wordsworth in a garbage can
2005-03-24
ch 1,
that last line was touched me a lot. I guess it wasn't worth it for her (the murderer) was it? sad story, good poem.
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