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| k-b-cook 2005-04-14 ch 1,   | Hmm bit of a strange topic, very original! A few spelling errors: She wanted to marry him toO.Tried to tell hiM to forgive her, Also missing a comma: But she lost her world, her life her friends, Otherwise very good! |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-24 ch 1, | that last line was touched me a lot. I guess it wasn't worth it for her (the murderer) was it? sad story, good poem. |