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| Reviews for Song of the Spring |
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   the twinkling of an eye 5/21/05 . chapter 1Fresh and pretty-just like spring. |
| Needa S 4/30/05 . chapter 1 Very nice, Awesome work! |
| Munchin 4/13/05 . chapter 1 Wow.. you are such a good and gentle writer. I really like your stuff.. And you seem to be an interesting character. Canadian too? Cool stuff. Well.. thanks for you review I appreciate the time. BYe |
| darkmistresslae 4/3/05 . chapter 1 it's really pretty. good flowing and imagery. nice work |
| Sorrowful Dreams 4/2/05 . chapter 1 great rhyme and has much inspiration to make me keep reading on. I love it. Your work keeps catching me. awesome work! |
| youzi 3/31/05 . chapter 1 This is a really pretty piece! Strangely tradtional in its descriptions, and hence giving us a familiar warm feeling..loved the line 'the sky’s gentle sway'.Keep writing! D |
| Adonia Chesser 3/27/05 . chapter 1 Wow, I usualy like the nature poems on. |
| Caim 3/27/05 . chapter 1 That really was spiritual wasn't it. It was really peaceful and was like a soothing lullaby a bit. Nice feeling - very relaxing. Oh and before anything else - thanks to my slow brain the reviews by Born Mistake...is mine. Thats just a different penname - sorry. |
| swift sky silver 3/21/05 . chapter 1 after a long pause, i'm back. you've been on a writing streak lately, eh?this is a great poem to read for the beginning of the season. it's so refreshing... and i don't even like spring. good work. keep it up 0) |
| KonekOniko 3/16/05 . chapter 1 that was just so...pretty. heh, i know, there are better words out there, but your poem simply left me in awe. it's so short but ever so sweet...your poem has such a calming effect to it, made me feel much better then two minutes ago -. great poem, i definately hope to see more from you! Sumi-chan; what you call love, i call pain. |
| An-Author-At-Heart 3/16/05 . chapter 1 Nice poem, the imagery was great. The language was very god too, well-written. Reading this brought a great peace to me as I pictured spring. I like the nice rhymes here and there in the poem. The rhymes didn't seem to be consistent, but I think the poem was good with rhymes or without. Though I think the few rhymes that did stand out gave the poem extra rhythm. Good job, keep it up! Oh, and thanks so much for the great review! |
| whitecap-walker 3/16/05 . chapter 1 ah spring! lol. i like the way this poem is put together. well done. |
| Dying Without Gackt 3/14/05 . chapter 1 Short but sweet - Very nice words, which painted very nice imagery. |
| Aruchu-chan 3/13/05 . chapter 1 Beautiful work! It's warm and sunny where I am, and this poem made my day even better. _ |
| Cloud Burst 3/13/05 . chapter 1 this brought a smile to my lips. so sweet, simple and beuatiful ) |
