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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-28 ch 1, | Quite fascinating. You have great pride in your work, which is good. But remember that there is always room for improvement. But I love the imagery in this. |
| .the twinkling of an eye 2005-03-24 ch 1, | "You won't be disappointed." And I most certainly wasnt!! That is breathtaking, amazing, beautiful, profound, and a million other adjectives. Honestly. And thanks so much for your review! |
| M. R. Smale 2005-03-13 ch 1, | So beautifully written, excellent flow of words and such vivid imagry as well. Keep up the great writings! |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-03-13 ch 1, | I absolutely love this one. Definately your best yet. It flows beautifully and the wording is amazing. I really love it. Brilliant work! ~Hip |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-03-12 ch 1, | Wha~~ pretty imagery~~ i likes!! makes me feel like i'm standing beneath starlight rite now!! Great work~~ keep writing! |