|Reviews for Imposing|
| this is britt 3/13/05 . chapter 1
it is, true to form, imposing! perhaps sarcasm in the alienation sentiment? like all of your poetry, it leaves me pondering afterwards.
| Nikkoletta St'arah 3/13/05 . chapter 1
The line breaks in the first stanza were distracting. The second stanza, however, was enjoyable. I can relate to the rest of it, but it doesn't personally bring out emotion, I only know it because I can interpret your vague description as I will- try using poetic devices such as similies, metaphors and just expressive description.