it is, true to form, imposing! perhaps sarcasm in the alienation sentiment? like all of your poetry, it leaves me pondering afterwards.

The line breaks in the first stanza were distracting. The second stanza, however, was enjoyable. I can relate to the rest of it, but it doesn't personally bring out emotion, I only know it because I can interpret your vague description as I will- try using poetic devices such as similies, metaphors and just expressive description.