me bagging u out right now...i go now

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oh the suspense! ::dies:: i like the way you ended it. suuch a cliffhanger. you should adapt it into a novel and write MORE! _;; slightly hyped up this morning... scrap writing short stories. write another chapter! (insert please here) This story is so brief, but i understand exactly what has been happening, even without knowing anything at all. i like this! awesome story! keep at it ok?

Georgia.

It's quite good to read, and the ending has lots of emotion...