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| grim-dreamer 2005-03-18 ch 1, | You know how to make people feel special about their lives, don't you? I liked the way you used the word 'random' to disintegrate the importance we place on actions made by strangers to us and ours to them. Don't... quite like the typos, but that's not the fault of the poem. The fault of the poem is that it is 'randomly' true. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-03-15 ch 1, | this too is good writings ;) |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Sums up the whole thing well, I like the way this is so unpoetic and not really "spectacular" because it reflects the whole thing the poem's about, I like this, I just found myself nodding at parts, this is a typing error though isn't it - "simlir" x weasel within x |
| Karma Chameleon 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Wow. Good job. You might want to change "simlir" to "similar" eventually. Anyway, keep it up. ~Karma Chameleon |