Mep. This was really good. ^.^

Wows... thats

DEEP

I like this one, its written in a uniqe way. I find it dramatic, I guess beacuse it leaves out alot of detail. Very well written, great work.

Oh my gosh... I loved it, it was beautiful! I love the mistrust, the fear, the emotion! Keep it up, pardner!

--Cerii-chan!

That was really cool how you use haiku style to write a narrative. Really well done!!