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| Lovedward48 2008-11-14 ch 12, | WTF? O.o You gotta be kidding me! A dog? May was a dog? This stories is way too far-tetched! I mean it'd been fine and acceptable if Erin'd been May but this? Two girls into reincarnation? Both their guys have the same name and they're all actually reincarnated in the same f*cking town? Somehow that's just not satisfying! There's got to be more to it! Cameron should have killed himself instead of calling Ally so Jesse and May would meet again in the next life as humans. It would have given off this amazing feeling of infinity that you managed to creat with the ending of the contract 1 The story in itself was excellent as always though! I enjoyed it! Your stories are always so refreshingly full of psychos!! Haha, I love them all!! |
| dramaqueen89 2008-08-01 ch 9, | Oh my god.. |
| dramaqueen89 2008-08-01 ch 5, | Oh my god. No. |
| Bleeding White Lily 2008-03-02 ch 12, | This was very good and very confusing. So did Jesse love May? I still don't know. . . so she was waiting for him to find her as a dog? Okay, I did like this! You get a gold star! XD MUCH LOVE! |
| pop-yur-fcukn-collar. 2008-02-15 ch 12, | I know it's been 3 years since this was first published but it deserves to be reviewed. It's such an interesting plotline, something you would never expect. I loved it :D |
| satoshii 2007-12-21 ch 12, | Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Such a perspective on the process of life and death that I'm simply speechless. Excellent work. |
| Heart Of The Moon 2007-11-18 ch 12, | It's beautiful. If you don't mind answering I have a question for you. He says he killed may because he hated her, then why does he miss her, at the end? It's strange. |
| atreyu love 2007-08-11 ch 12, | oh wow. so may was the dog?? unexpected. it was a good story though, but an alternate ending would also have been cool :) lol but otherwise, i love your writing. they dont seem to have happy endings, but not all things end happy. |
| atreyu love 2007-08-11 ch 9, | OMG. i kinda love jesse. |
| atreyu love 2007-08-11 ch 1, | whoa. interesting concept, reincarnation. the story has an interesting plot. cant wait to read the rest. |
| hola 2007-07-21 ch 1, | hmm, never noticed before, but i actually know a cameron hill. slightly creepy seeing as he's all angry now days. but yeah. weird. |
| personwithaccount 2007-07-17 ch 12, | the ending got me. i didn't even realize the whole age difference and i would have never gotten in a million years that May was the dog. |
| emma 2007-07-14 ch 12, | i have to tell you that i love this story, i mean its kind of gory and whatever but its really beautiful. I haven't reviewed every chapter but thats because i read the whole thing all in one hit. I was addicted, lol. anyway. I just wanted to tell you what i thought of your story, thanks for putting it up here so i was able to read it. Thanks, for a great story. :) |
| MeZzeDUpGuRL 2007-06-06 ch 12, | Dude, you're so twisted. But I certainly liked it. No, really, i did. i really like it...I dun know why. Hehehe. I liked Jesse by the end, he was...cool. Heheh, and May came out as a dog? Too bad...And Erin kind of sounded like May in a way coz she also believed in reincarnation and too much of a coincidence that she also had a boyfriend named Jesse, who was also a cutter... Keep writing, i'm loving your stories even if they aren't my usual story reads. XD Hhehehe -Jessi |
| snowbunny44 2007-03-05 ch 12, | this is a really cool story. it's the kind of stuff that usually gives me a head ache to think about, and that's partially why I loved it so much. |