Not my cup of Tea but still very good i enjoyed it somewhat, but ur a good writer keep up the good work (R+R my stuff i kno you'll like it)

This is well written. It's short, but not in a way that makes me upset, it's to the point and not a pain to read. (I do read somethings on fp.com that are eyesores and make me wish I hadn't clicked the link, but this isn't like that.) Be proud of this, you did a good job.

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aw that's so sweet! I loved it.

I loved it. Very well written. It's so depressing, but it pulls you in. I couldn't stop reading. ^^ Keep writing, you will do well.