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| HermitInMyOwnHead 2005-06-07 ch 1, | that was sad, but brilliant.have a nice day |
| strawberryblitz 2005-06-06 ch 1, | Very deep and emotional, good use of words and you did a really well job at puting your feelings down thats hard to do.. GOOD JOB KEEP WRITING :D |
| ihdreniel 2005-04-22 ch 1, | very thought provoking, and very sad. For some reason, it reminds me of the song 'Danny Boy'. |
| staras 2005-04-15 ch 1, | wow..wonderful poem, i can relate to the point of view in it, very deep, never stop writing |
| heavensnt 2005-03-30 ch 1, | aw! thats so sweet n sad i luv it! |
| Infection 2005-03-13 ch 1, | deep- the words conveyed intense emotions. Good work!-infection- |
| Chole Asterion 2005-03-13 ch 1, | It is a very good poem, it is not often you find poems on this site from the point of view of a person doing the hurting. There is a lot of feeling in this work, a great way to start to off. Good job, keep writing! |