This is so powerful...the words are twisted, confusing even, and they portray the shedding of childhood. I love it.

Wow. you capture feelings really, really, well. keep it up! :)

Wow! This is very powerful. Good job. It sounds just like it could be written about one of my friends. I like it!

Wow...I actually loved this. I think so many of us never realize that the little girl dies in us...we try to cling onto it...but it just leaves us. Great piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I think the "poem" at the end was a very good touch. Great imagery and flow of the whole piece. Amazing write.