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| Ballerina with a Gun 2005-06-16 ch 1, | This is so powerful...the words are twisted, confusing even, and they portray the shedding of childhood. I love it. |
| Aryanda 2005-03-31 ch 1, | Wow. you capture feelings really, really, well. keep it up! :) |
| Me 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Wow! This is very powerful. Good job. It sounds just like it could be written about one of my friends. I like it! |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-13 ch 1, | Wow...I actually loved this. I think so many of us never realize that the little girl dies in us...we try to cling onto it...but it just leaves us. Great piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I think the "poem" at the end was a very good touch. Great imagery and flow of the whole piece. Amazing write. |