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| .dear. Disaster 2005-06-30 ch 1,   | intresting |
| Infinite Abyss 2005-03-28 ch 1, | That was pretty good. |
| Armas Apple 2005-03-28 ch 1, | I like the rhyming, for it did not seem forced. Very nice subject. Absoloutly lovely. |
| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 ch 1, | You are right...there does seem to be a balance of good and evil in the world...or at least a balance that is on its way. I enjoyed this poem. Beautiful and sad at the same time. Great flow and wonderful read. Nice piece. |
| Oracular Echo 2005-03-17 ch 1, | I thought it was Yin-Yang? I guess it could go either way, but I'm pretty sure that Yin-Yang is more accurate. Anyway, these set of poems woven together create a similar mood, and while I didn't take a lot of time to sit down and do a poetry analysis for this, which sometimes you have to do--not saying that what you wrote is hard to understand or poorly written--you still conveyed that mood to me well, and I understood the basic theme. Going back to read it again now, I am picking up on a lot more heavy things than I did the first time through. Short but meaningful poems you have here. Keep it up. And thanks for the review. |
| Wistera 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Ooh. I love the "white unicorn/black horse" part. Makes it a lot stronger. Also the "Being true but not being nice"Nice. |
| breezy nostrils 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I found that really interesting, especially the last stanza. Thanks for sharing. |
| AllyCred 2005-03-15 ch 1, | OMG...so good i love it...you get the feelings out so well and its just so good...very well written. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Suz4eva 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I liked this. Good job. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Really beautiful. Loved the lightness/darkness factor. Good work! |
| Karma Chameleon 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I really like this. I am not sure that I fully understand it, but it captures my attention nonetheless. Often times you might want to pun "an" instead of "a" if the following word is going to begin with a vowel, but maybe it is that way intentionally. Anyway, good job on this. Keep it up. ~Karma Chameleon |