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| Shades Of Autumn 2005-11-30 ch 1,   | I feel exactly the same way ^_^ nice poem though. |
| HermitInMyOwnHead 2005-06-07 ch 1, | short but who cares, it was great. yer a good poet.have a nice day |
| Noir Fleurir 2005-05-10 ch 1, | i like this poem it sounds like me a little bit.Sometimes i am invisible and when i'm not i wish that i were. |
| ihdreniel 2005-04-22 ch 1, | excellent! I love your poetry. |
| darkmistresslae 2005-04-03 ch 1, | This is a nice poem. I like this one a lot, there's definate emotion in it. Really nice job. The narrorater seems like he feels so small in the world. nice effect. |
| Selah Ex Animo 2005-03-19 ch 1, | Oh wow... great poem! It's sad, and one I can relate to. I particularly liked the lines, Am I really there at all?Do I live,only in my own mind? ... and the ending. This was a very nice poem. Thanks for posting it! ^^ Also, I would like to thank you for your review on my work! Muchas gracias! Oh dear... my apologies for the liberal use of big, grandiose vocabulary! I've made an attempt to use them more carefully, to no avail... But anyway. Thank you for the review, and for posting this wonderful piece of poetry! - Selah |