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Reviews For: The Three Swords

tinman101
2007-03-14
ch 1,
perty cool,but there are some spelling errors
and by the way, what time peiriod is this based
Cari-anne
2005-04-18
ch 1,
This was an awesome story. I can't wait to read more. You did a good job of introducing the characters. Ending it the those questions laid the outline for the next few chapters. Now we know what we will be finding out eventually. One thing though. In the third paragraph second sentence you wrote "He had a He sighed " You probably didn't mean to write He had a. Just to let you know. Awesome job though. I look forward to much more.
periguine5
2005-04-14
ch 1,
I was OK but who makes a story about orphans? and you are too obsesed with tolkien. and they're is bad grammar in your storie.
TheAngelofhope
2005-03-20
ch 1,
Enjoyed this so much. This is really good, and a great stroy idea. Keep up the great work I know you can do it. :)
NotA-Frayed
2005-03-16
ch 1,
Very, very good! I think that it is definately your best. I really, really want to see where it's going. Great way of grabbing your readers. The characters and descriptions are great. Best of all, it is pleasurable. I hate reading gross and/or inapropriate stories. Anywhos, good!
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